Essay

Hi professor,
sorry for late essay submiting because I am still working on third body paragraph on my essay.I will submit on Monday.
Moreover, I am confused with poor and middle class categories.I have remembered that you saying there are only two classes middle and high classes.If I write poor and middle classes in the same paragraph, will it be fine?or Do I have to mention both in seprate paragraphs?

post 4

Today, econnomics is the one of the biggest issues in America.In the "Cofronting inequality," Paul Krugman responds to how inequality affecting to median income people and why should we care about it.I agree with him because inequality makes median income people more stressful.Because if we see some people around us getting richer day by day, and some people not getting rich or just moving little bit ofcourse we feel stress.As human beings, we want progress and develop ourself in any field.such as: studying, working and promotion, and good income.We all have desire in these things.

Midium class people have stressful life because they have to do so many things with their little money.Such as:rent, food, paying bills, support child care etc.They work very hard but don't have time for families.For example, "Who built pyramids," Mike Lefevre wishes, If I had a twenty- hour workweek,I'd get to know my kids better, my wife better.This is reality because in America many poor families wishing for this to happen, however, it's not easy because if they work less, their minimum wages not enough to support their families.On the other hand, in the film,"Born rich" people have alot of money they can do whatever they want, still they afraid of losing money and some of them are bored .So it shows inequality makes people in the society unsatisfied.

post # 3

After reading "Who built the pyramids," Mike has stressful life such as, taking care of family, only work, no time to spend with his family.He excepts his son to go college and work official job.I think human beings do better than what our parents did.Almost every parents expect their kids' mobility in every field.On the other hand, in" Born rich,"rich people have alot of money and their own society.They don't know outside enviornment how it feels like.How work feels like they don't know because don't need to do it.However, in some ways born rich kids are bored because some of them want to do some professional things.They're isolated.In "Who built the pyramids,"Mike has more expectatin than "Born rich," at least poor people work hard want better life for kids.
Professor, did I answer correctly because I am confused with connecting two ideas together.