In Up against Wal-Mart, page number 343 "The way they pay you, you cannot make it by yourself without having second job or someone to help you".This sentence cut my attention because when I came this country, I worked in supermarket as a cashier, where they paid me $6.50 per hour, that mean $250 a week.How would I survive with out having a second job or help? I got second job, but I could not do it because standing sixteen hours a day isn't easy task.My husband have a good job that helps me.Otherwise it would be hard within minimum wage.For example, rent, electricity bills, telephone bills, food and many things.While I was working, I realized that I have to go school.Without study, my life will be more difficult that'swhy I enrolled in Laguardia college hoping for learning and being an educated person. I wrote little out of topic the last sentence.
I think this will be my begining of my essay, but I will correct, take off some sentences, and add more.
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Hi Shova - Good start - think about how you're introducing your quotation. Will it make sense to your reader? Who is speaking in the quote? Also, you can give the page number just after the quote so it doesn't interrupt your sentence.
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